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RCS file: /cvs/mandoc/Attic/index.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -p -r1.13 -r1.15
--- mandoc/Attic/index.sgml	2009/03/24 10:28:06	1.13
+++ mandoc/Attic/index.sgml	2009/03/24 20:05:43	1.15
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
 
 					<p>
 					<span class="nm">mdocml</span> is a suite of tools compiling &#8220;-mdoc&#8221;, the roff macro
-					package for BSD manual pages.  The mission of <span class="nm">mdocml</span> is to deprecate <a
-					href="http://www.gnu.org/software/groff/" class="external">groff</a>, the GNU roff implementation, for
-					displaying BSD mdoc pages.
+					package of choice for BSD manual pages.  The mission of <span class="nm">mdocml</span> is to deprecate
+					<a href="http://www.gnu.org/software/groff/" class="external">groff</a>, the GNU roff implementation,
+					for displaying -mdoc pages.
 					</p>
 
 					<p>
@@ -39,21 +39,20 @@
 					<p>
 					The core of <span class="nm">mdocml</span> is the libmdoc library, a validating scanner-parser producing
 					intermediate-form output from -mdoc input.  libmdoc is a simple, fast library operating on memory
-					buffers, so it can be used for a variety of front-ends (terminal-based, CGI and so on).  The primary
-					front-end is <span class="man">mandoc(1)</span>, which formats -mdoc manuals for display on the
-					terminal.
+					buffers, so it can be used for a variety of front-ends (terminal-based, CGI and so on).  
 					</p>
-
+					
 					<p>
-					The <span class="man">mandoc(1)</span> utility is intended to deprecate usage of <a
+					The primary front-end is <span class="man">mandoc(1)</span>, which formats -mdoc manuals for display on
+					the terminal.  The <span class="man">mandoc(1)</span> utility is intended to deprecate usage of <a
 					href="http://www.gnu.org/software/groff/" class="external">groff</a> for displaying mdoc manuals on the
 					terminal.
 					</p>
 
 					<p>
-					<span class="attn">Please submit patches!</span> Although a significant implementation exists, work
-					remains for the backend library and especially the front-end utilities.  See the <a
-					href="#contact">contact</a> information below to submit patches and bug reports.
+					<span class="attn">Please submit patches, bug reports and suggestions!</span> Although a significant
+					implementation exists, work remains for the backend library and especially the front-end utilities.  See
+					the <a href="#contact">contact</a> information below for submissions.
 					</p>
 				</td>
 			</tr>
@@ -65,7 +64,7 @@
 
 					<p>
 					Sources correctly build and install on FreeBSD, OpenBSD, NetBSD and Linux operating systems, tested
-					variously on i386, AMD64, Alpha and others. 
+					variously on i386, AMD64, alpha and others. 
 					</p>
 
 					<p>
@@ -98,10 +97,12 @@
 					<p>
 					The source snapshot is automatically converted into OpenBSD, NetBSD and FreeBSD ports at <a
 					href="/ports-openbsd/">/ports-openbsd/</a>, <a href="/ports-netbsd/">/ports-netbsd/</a> and <a
-					href="/ports-freebsd/">/ports-freebsd/</a>, respectively.  Please read the <a
-					href="http://www.openbsd.org/faq/faq15.html">OpenBSD Ports FAQ</a>, <a
-					href="http://www.netbsd.org/docs/software/packages.html">NetBSD pkgsrc guide</a> or <a
-					href="http://www.freebsd.org/ports/">FreeBSD Ports Guide</a> first.
+					href="/ports-freebsd/">/ports-freebsd/</a>, respectively.  Please read the <a class="external"
+					href="http://www.openbsd.org/faq/faq15.html">OpenBSD Ports FAQ</a>, the <a class="external"
+					href="http://www.netbsd.org/docs/software/packages.html">NetBSD pkgsrc guide</a> or the <a
+					class="external"
+					href="http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports-using.html">FreeBSD ports
+					guide</a>, first.
 					</p>
 
 					<h3>
@@ -137,12 +138,11 @@
 					</h3>
 
 					<p class="boxed">
-					# pkg_delete mdocml<br>
-					# cd /usr/ports/textproc/<br>
-					# rm -rf mdocml<br>
+					# pkg_delete -x mdocml<br>
+					# cd /tmp<br>
 					# ftp -V -o- http://mdocml.bsd.lv/ports-freebsd/mdocml.tar.gz | tar -zvxf -<br>
 					# cd mdocml<br>
-					# make build<br>
+					# make<br>
 					# make install
 					</p>
 				</td>
@@ -158,7 +158,8 @@
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 					onclick="window.open('http://mailhide.recaptcha.net/d?k=01jt88xIsFONwVjHZmGpc4AQ==&amp;c=sb5E6ulipc-eTnpTVqI-BQ==',
 					'', 'toolbar=0,scrollbars=0,location=0,statusbar=0,menubar=0,resizable=0,width=500,height=300'); return
-					false;" title="Reveal this e-mail address">...</a>@kth.se, with questions, bug reports, patches, and so on.  
+					false;" title="Reveal this e-mail address">...</a>@kth.se, with questions, bug reports, patches, and so
+					on.  
 					</p>
 					
 					<p>
@@ -170,7 +171,7 @@
 			<tr>
 				<td>
 					<div class="foot">
-						Copyright &#169; 2008, 2009 Kristaps D&#382;onsons, $Date: 2009/03/24 10:28:06 $
+						Copyright &#169; 2008, 2009 Kristaps D&#382;onsons, $Date: 2009/03/24 20:05:43 $
 					</div>
 				</td>
 			</tr>